100 word challenge Lucy

Posted on by class5lkeps

When I was 9 years old my dream was to go to America. Now I am 30 and I’m finally going today.

…then when I looked out the plane window  I saw a weird looking sofa.when I got of the plane I went to the sofa. When I got to the sofa I saw a black cat and the sofa didn’t look comfy. I jumped onto the sofa and I screeched really loud in pain. I didn’t really like this mysterious sofa so i left it and went to enjoy my trip to America so I went to town and enjoyed myself.

3 thoughts on “100 word challenge Lucy”

  2. You included adverbs in your writing Lucy, well done! Next time use the prompt (it will be a picture OR a photo) and try and create your short story around it. Today I think you mixed up 2 weeks prompts (which a few people did) which made it a little confusing.

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