I walked up the stairs that lead to the orange plane and gave my passport to the woman to check. Then I put my packed bag above my seat and sat down. I couldn’t wait to go to New York! It was my lifelong dream to go this place and I’m going now! The Stewardess acted out what you would do if the plane crashed, but I knew that wouldn’t happen. It shouldn’t. Soon, we set off into the air. Then,when I looked out the plane window, I saw another plane. And it was coming to crash into us! No!
I really enjoyed your 100 words Ellie; it was very exciting! Your writing could be even better if you tried to include an adverb to match each verb. A great start!
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Awesome,great,amazing 😃
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That was great! 😄
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