It was a great day for me as I was going to Japan on a jet .Although it would take at least 8hours to get there it would be worth it. I put my seat belt on quickly and was ready to go.
8hours later .Then when I looked out of the plane window seeing a giant creature falling from the sky.It was some kind of enormous black snake rising from the ocean, and was heading for Japan. It was destroying everything in its path including buildings and boats! The plane turned around and headed back to London.Luckily ,We survived…
Nice story
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Very exiting
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Very dramatic Ed, well done! This was a good first blog post and 100wc entry. You could improve further by including adverbs with each if your verbs and re-composing your text to save you an words which you don’t really need.
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Eat dramatic ed πππππππππππππππππππππmust have been a lot of hard workπ°π
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Cool πππ story
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Very good . Scott π₯π₯
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Very good. ππππππLucy welsh
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